About Pelwrath

Biography

Name:
Jeffrey Yorio
Sex:
Male
Age:
59
Sign:
Virgo
Relationship Status:
Married
Orientation:
Straight
location:
Spenceport, New York, United States
Local Time:
16 Jun 2019 07:18

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Posted: 11 Jun 2019 16:17

My mist recent story and so far those commenting really like it.

//vermect.ru/stories/humor/-the-cuckolds-comeuppance-the-secret.aspx

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Posted: 07 Jun 2019 16:46

Congrats on the EP! You’re one heck of a writer, I might get one in another three years. I both learn from and enjoy your stories.

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Posted: 31 May 2019 05:59




Here is the link for the first in the Flame of Vengeance: //vermect.ru/stories/love-stories/-the-flame-of-vengeance-is-red-.aspx

The link for the beginning of my Desires Flame series and first erotic story I;ve written: //vermect.ru/stories/novels/-orange-is-desires-flame-.aspx

one of my poems: //vermect.ru/stories/erotic-poems/-your-ladys-dreams-.aspx

The begining of How Far Would I go for Love series: //vermect.ru/stories/threesomes/-how-far-would-i-go-for-love-.aspx

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Posted: 29 May 2019 18:27

I’ll check them out.

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Posted: 29 May 2019 07:30

Read the first part and enjoyed it. Left a comment and looking forward for part 2 .

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Posted: 27 May 2019 06:36

I’ll add that in the newest story, I’m looking for suggestions in the comments about things the reader(s) would like to see. I’ve some general notes for it but nothing concrete. I may not use the entire idea but am looking forward to what the readers would be interested in.

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Posted: 26 May 2019 22:00

I'm interested in receiving critique's about my stories. Here is my most recent //vermect.ru/stories/love-stories/-vince-and-abbys-first-threesome-that.aspx

You're more than welcome to post them here any suggestions that could help me might be able to help other writers on lush. I've been told by a MOd(Curvey) that my writing is really improving. Reading the stories of that were selected as RR's and those in the recent competition, multiple times.

As a reader, I do tend to over analyze a story and that might affect my writing, maybe that's my style. I stepped away from that with my "How far would I go for Love" series, the first is here //vermect.ru/stories/threesomes/-how-far-would-i-go-for-love-.aspx Based on votes, comments and views it's my most successful story here, yet I don't see what makes it better than my other stories.

If anyone would like a critique from em, i's be happy to provide them.

Thanks,

Pelwrath

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Posted: 17 May 2019 22:43

Comments are the best, be they good or bad. I learn from either and have even PM'd a member when I didn't understand their comment or was looking for more information. I always than each person who comments on my stories or poems.

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Posted: 08 May 2019 10:43

The longer a story is the fewer views it generally receives. Not to say I and others don’t read 9k+ stories, members do. There seems to be a drop in views the more chapters you have. It’s a tough balancing act. I look at a max of 3-4k words, a personal choice as I’m looking for feedback on my story.

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Posted: 03 May 2019 10:04

Was there just a winner, congrats to Browncoffee for that great story, or were there finalists, honorable mention stories?

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Stories Published By Pelwrath All Stories »

The Cuckold's Comeuppance: The Secret Revenge of Walter Mitty

The Cuckold’s Comeuppance: The Secret Revenge of Walter Mitty     The soon to be ex Mrs. Miller was at lunch with her lawyer. “Bob, what the hell is taking that god damned judge so long?” “Relax Carol. You know this is the divorce and criminal trial of the century. The judge did say she’d have a decision today. It’s not even noon.” “Listen, mother-fucker, you said my name wouldn’t...

Added 10 Jun 2019 | Category Humor | Votes 14 | Avg Score 5 | Views 805 | 10 Comments

Vince and Abby's First Threesome; That Morning

Abby woke with her head next to his, an arm over his chest, and a leg between his legs. Vince was still sleeping and a slight smell of sex lingered in the bed. What a birthday you gave me last night, she thought. One month short of a year as a couple, Abby had learned that Vince was a wonderful, caring, and surprising man. What you’ve learned and we’ve experienced in that time, she...

Added 23 May 2019 | Category Love Stories | Votes 5 | Avg Score 4.4 | Views 885 | 3 Comments

Covering Your Bets

Meredith Daulton was working on her next book, by the pool. Charles approached with her brunch. “Good morning Ms. Daulton. Brunch is served. Your 10:45 is enjoying a brunch. His name and vitals are on the summary card. I’ll bring him out.” Meredith put her tablet down to review the information. Paul J. Caruso, 28, Masters of Science in Italian History, a social studies teacher, and a...

Added 04 Apr 2019 | Category Flash Erotica | Votes 30 | Avg Score 4.68 | Views 833 | 32 Comments

Looked But Didn't See

This vixen had such fun, I knew not, what I’d done. The loving that night was rigorous, as we laughed at your ignorance.   A fortnight thereafter, I had no reason for laughter. My episodic weekend of euphoria, now replaced by mourning nausea.   Treated to lunch, through sorrowful tears I begged, your nature I’d never truly pegged. My lecherous lips, forgiven, graced by your tongue,...

Added 12 May 2019 | Category Love Poems | Votes 3 | Avg Score 4.67 | Views 226 | 2 Comments

Your Lady's Dreams

  I laughed when you said I was café au lait. I’ll make sure you... stay up... late, You make my kitty cat purr, my Italian Monsieur. My brothers to you bragged about size and girth The smile on your face, one of mirth you talked about skill and having only a hammer all they could do was stammer. I fondle your gift, an Italian horn dreaming of another, both my lips to adorn. ...

Added 27 Mar 2019 | Category Erotic Poems | Votes 4 | Avg Score 4.5 | Views 294 | 2 Comments

My Lover's Touch

She’s a guardian angel who freed my conscience. What cursed thread bound you to my life? We meet at the bistro, to witness dawn’s light. My mind feels our hands caress over coffee shared. We stroll along the canal greeting friends and ghosts alike. My hands at my side our shadows' arms entwine. Your smile’s a baited trap your laugh like a prison. We discuss our life and the future. Why...

Added 21 Mar 2019 | Category Love Poems | Votes 2 | Avg Score 4 | Views 283 | 1 Comment

Between the covers

You penny dreadful thing, a five and dime dame. Whispering in my ear, you still love to wear my ring. Wise trollop queen, you still know how many licks to make your king's heart sing.  ...

Added 18 Mar 2019 | Category Love Poems | Votes 2 | Avg Score 4 | Views 242 | 1 Comment

The Flame of Vengeance is Red

The weeks before Vince went back to college were busy. It took three days and some encouragement, as Vince helped Abby register for classes. All of her previous credits were still current, so she only needed two semesters to get her degree. She was approved for tuition reimbursement, provided she got a 3.0 average. He met her for lunch twice a week, her inquisitive friends no longer a problem....

Added 15 Mar 2019 | Category Love Stories | Votes 1 | Avg Score 4 | Views 785

The Flame of Vengeance Is Red Part 2

Martin Martin had done everything that Tammy told him to do. He did admit that calling Abby a slut wasn’t very smart. He liked Abby more than most of the girls he dated. If she didn’t have any kids he might have considered actually dating her. He liked kids and hers were okay but single mothers were looking for a father more than a relationship. He agreed that he’d change, at least to...

Added 20 Mar 2019 | Category Love Stories | Votes 1 | Avg Score 4 | Views 504

The Flame of Vengence is Red part 3

The next morning, Abby got up with the alarm. She went downstairs and started a pot of coffee. Put some bagels and cream cheese out then went to make sure Vince was awake. When she went to nudge him, his arm snaked out and grabbed her, pulling her down on top of him. “Good morning, Abby,” he said as he kissed her. Abby returned the kiss with interest. “You were faking it.” “Yes, the smell...

Added 01 Apr 2019 | Category Novels | Votes 1 | Avg Score 4 | Views 511

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